Talk:Varadu/@comment-7281746-20151110140651

The problem that people are having with this profile is that you're stating Varadu is -the- most powerful Mage within the Grand Alliance, an organization that spans several diverse races. The -the-, is the problem. It makes it sounds like it's a stated fact. I admit, I like to make my characters to be exceptionally talented individuals, esspecially my spell casters. But, I'd never go so far to say they are -the- best in any category.

I'd strongly suggest replacing "the most powerful mage Mage," with "one of the most powerful Mages."