Board Thread:Lore and Fanon Discussion/@comment-32773147-20170817194323/@comment-32773147-20170817223908

Phiniksa wrote: Hrm...Let me give her a look!

Well, I'm a little iffy about years/time conversion, but otherwise it's fine besides your mention of your character's OOC level. Unless otherwise stated, the majority of the information in a character's article will usually be IC, so the mention of levels tend to be something you'd want to stay away from. I am also posting a few suggestions about your character on the other blog!

Otherwise, it's a GREAT start and don't hesitate to ask for help. Could you tell me what is wrong with the time/years? Like what part may not make sense? I also removed the level.